Chapters 1 & 2

I have gone ahead and rewritten the first two chapters of the opening of Afterlife. I let it sit for nearly 2 months while I worked on other projects. Yesterday I went back to it, and re-read those first two chapters. The first thing I asked was "Where am I?". My voice, the one I have been writing with more recently, was missing. It was like I was trying to write a business letter or something, rather than fiction.

So I rewrote it, and am now going through another round of edits on it with my lovely beta reader and the master reader. Once they are through, hopefully this week, I will post them here, and you can get a taste of what this storyline is about.